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The Photographer’s Workshop Assignment: Composition on a Shoot

- March 26, 2011 - by , in family life, with 0 -

Part Two of my Composition Assignment for The Photographer’s Workshop was to use the principles of composition while on a family outing. For this outing, I chose my dad’s birthday (a couple of photos might look familiar). We went to Bangkok City, our favorite Thai restaurant. I got my favorite: Chicken Pad Thai, medium spicy.

Photo One:

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Photo One

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Photo One: My dad on his 69th birthday

My Assignment Comments: My outing was to a Thai restaurant for my Dad’s birthday. I like how the background and foreground frame my dad, putting the focus on him. And how they help tell the story. I think he’s centered enough… I guess he could be MORE centered if I framed it a bit to the left. But I think I was avoiding Isabel’s arm. So, maybe post-processing. If I put him higher in the frame, I’d get less bokeh and more cluttered table, so I think I’m okay with him being in the middle for this shot. Maybe I could have lowered him a bit to crop out the soy sauce and cups…

Photo Two:

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Photo Two

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Photo Two

My Assignment Comments: I like that this has both Ryan and Isabel in it – it’s hard to get them in a shot where they are enjoying each other. I don’t like how blurry Isabel is, but I guess it puts more focus on Ryan. And at least the foreground person is more in focus. I can’t believe I took this with a shutter speed of 50 – yikes! I think I’d have removed the soy sauce bottle from the foreground. And framed the shot a little higher to include at least both of Isabel’s eyebrows and a bit more forehead… And there you have it. Week One’s Assignment is completed. 😉 Thanks in advance, Alby! Sorry it took so long!

Here are other photos I took that day but did not submit for the assignment.

Other Photos:

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 1

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Dannibeth

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 2

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Grandma

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 3

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - This waitress is so sweet. She always refers to the children by name: Brian and Elizabeth (hey, that's CLOSE).

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 4

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ryan can't resist watching the TV.

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 5

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Isabel eats edamame.

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 6

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Isabel and her standard California Roll. I love this shot. Bummed it is blurry (and that her arm is cut off).

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 7

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ryan and Isabel

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 8

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ryan with his staple, Chicken and Baby Corn (with no other veggies).

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 9

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ryan with his staple, Chicken and Baby Corn (with no other veggies).

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 10

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ice cream birthday cake from Cold Stone Creamery

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - 11

TPW Assignment One | Composition on a Shoot | Other Photos - Ice cream birthday cake from Cold Stone Creamery